
Some companies come right out and say in their advertising who they’re
targeting — witness Volkswagen’s slogan for “Drivers wanted.” But you don’t
have to create the next big advertising slogan to attract people to your store
or business. You just have to use a bit more creativity than the other guys in
devising a compelling message so people choose your business over your
competition’s. (To dig a little deeper on this topic, turn to Chapter 4.)
Finding a Creative Hook
Because you want your ads to stand head and shoulders above the crowded
universe of advertising, you need to work hard at finding a creative hook —
something that grabs potential customers (but not necessarily by the neck)
and drags them to buy your products or services. A creative hook is an emo-
tional trigger that attracts the buyer, something that appeals to the self-image
of the buyer, an affirmation that you provide what the buyer is looking for. It
may be a slogan, a phrase, a jingle, a single line of copy, or a unique look that
appears in all your ads. But whatever it is, your creative hook must be yours
and yours alone, because you use it, across all media, to differentiate your
business from all the others.
Take a moment to glean from this example: DeBeers is the most well-known
diamond dealer to most people, and it continually updates its advertising. It
has been wildly successful in developing creative hooks for its ad campaigns.
Check out the following DeBeers slogans and how the company adjusted its
message to its target audience:
“A diamond is forever.” DeBeers created this now-famous slogan to
ensure that people wouldn’t sell their diamonds, which would create a
secondary market.
“Tell her you’d marry her all over again.” To expand its market
beyond just engagement rings, DeBeers targeted a new market of the
husbands of older, married women, with the “eternity ring” for anniver-
saries and a creative ad campaign that pitched this slogan.
“Your left hand says you’re taken. Your right hand says you can take
over. Your left hand celebrates the day you were married. Your right
hand celebrates the day you were born. Women of the world, raise
your right hand.” To appeal to women directly, either single or married
women who want to buy a ring for themselves, DeBeers crafted the cre-
ative hook of “the right-hand ring.”
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